In today's lesson, I finished my journalism for my double page spread, and all I need to do now is add the page numbers and fix it up based on the feedback I receive from my classmates.
The double page spread is very good in terms of the writing about the artist. The font and the use of the colours used fits with the genre. For an improvement, maybe the title of the main artist mentioned could be included at the top of the double page spread.
I like the use of pull quotes which certainly those pull a reader into reading the article. I also like the image and how it reflects upon the content of the article. A lovely article, very well written. For improvement, you should use the same shade of red you used on the pull quotes as for the artist's name
The double page spread is very good in terms of the writing about the artist. The font and the use of the colours used fits with the genre. For an improvement, maybe the title of the main artist mentioned could be included at the top of the double page spread.
ReplyDeleteI like the use of pull quotes which certainly those pull a reader into reading the article. I also like the image and how it reflects upon the content of the article. A lovely article, very well written. For improvement, you should use the same shade of red you used on the pull quotes as for the artist's name
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