Teacher's feedback on my music magazine

Today my teacher gave me constructive feedback on how to make my magazine better and much more conventional. She gave me feedback such as making the barcode smaller, less writing on the cover and more. 

Evaluation plan

My cover page, contents page and double page spread for my H.I.T music magazine

Cover page continuation

On my cover page, there is a blank space next to my masthead on the top right hand corner, after taking advice from my teacher, I put another shape there to fill in that space, however, I do not like how it looks and prefer it empty.

Continuation of cover page

In today's lesson, I continued working on my cover page using Adobe Photoshop. I've started to add in my cover lines and fitting them around the page to fill in the spaces.

Continuation of cover page

In today's lesson I continued working on my cover page by adding the barcode, price and website link. I changed the text slightly so that it is not over the cover star making it easier to read the text as it seemed to clash before. 

Continuation of DPS

In today's lesson I continued working on my double page spread. I added the mast head, the date and the page number at the bottom corners as I containers working on how I arranged the text to make it all fit nicely so that it is readable and presentable.